Writing

Page One… How to Start Your Story

I've seen the advice repeated over and over and over again: START WITH ACTION! Like books are: Lights! Camera! Action! Gimme a break. Books are not movies and that's why we have both. They do different things. After listening to a dialogue from Agent Hannah Fergesen on Manuscript Academy, you don't start with action... you… Continue reading Page One… How to Start Your Story

Writing

Disney’s Frozen as a Case Study in Scene

My toddler has her favorite parts of movies (cue Let It Go) and I find it fascinating how movies effortlessly transition- just like a story scene should. I study these transitions to improve my writing. Next time you're staring down the barrel of another Disney movie try this! Go to the scene selection menu on… Continue reading Disney’s Frozen as a Case Study in Scene

Writing

Kill Your Darlings: Revising for Exclusion

Okay so I didn't actually kill off any of my characters, not yet at least. But they do get hurt. What we really need to focus on is not letting your personal goals, agenda, or outline mess up what your characters are really like or would really do. Just because you have a favorite part… Continue reading Kill Your Darlings: Revising for Exclusion